January 18th, 2004


Meditation and daily rites

Wrote this this morning. I'm planning on submitting it to Ian to include in the DP, since the current version of the DP doesn't include things I wanted to see.

I want comments and suggestions, if you don't mind. I'm mostly happy with it, but I want to make it better, if I can. I'm only addressing certain things, so it won't get much broader. But if you could let me know if it's clear and consise, I'd appreciate that.

Sometimes, if you want it in there, you have to write it yourself. After seeing the newest draft, I'm assuming that those people who didn't like the previous DP didn't submit anything to improve it.

Put your money where your freaking mouth is. If you want changes, you'd best be prepared to write them out. Collapse )