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November 2nd, 2006


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01:07 pm - Inspiration invocation
Inspiration Invocation. Written at lunch, Thursday, November 2, 2006:
I reach deeply within myself;
   seeking, searching.
My eyes turn inward and see deep;
   seeking, searching.
My fingers reach out, feeling forth;
   seeking, searching.
My ears are open, listening;
   seeking, searching.
My nose sniffs for any sign here;
   seeking, searching.
My tongue tastes the sweet nectar now;
   seeking, searching.
Here it is, within me, calling;
   seeking, searching.
Here I am, to greet it, hold it;
   seeking, searching.
Here we are, together, tightly;
   holding, knowing.
Inspiration, I call to you;
   hold me, know me.

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From:singingwren
Date:November 2nd, 2006 08:33 pm (UTC)
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Not to be a grammar nazi, but "My eyes turn inward and see deep" should end in "see deeply." I mention this because the lack of an -ly is on some level jarring.

I like the ending.
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From:chronarchy
Date:November 2nd, 2006 08:42 pm (UTC)
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"It's poetry man, back off."
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From:singingwren
Date:November 2nd, 2006 09:25 pm (UTC)
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You wanna fight?

I'll show YOU inspiration, you pansy poet!!!
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From:chronarchy
Date:November 2nd, 2006 09:32 pm (UTC)
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heh. It's a quote from somewhere. I think the Reduced Shakespeare Company, actually. Or, possibly, Dr. Science.

I forget which.

But when I get around to attempting to revise this draft, I'll take your request for a change to an adverb under consideration.
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From:singingwren
Date:November 2nd, 2006 09:37 pm (UTC)
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*laughs* I am honoured.

Now you need to set this baby to music. ;)

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