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November 2nd, 2006


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01:07 pm - Inspiration invocation
Inspiration Invocation. Written at lunch, Thursday, November 2, 2006:
I reach deeply within myself;
   seeking, searching.
My eyes turn inward and see deep;
   seeking, searching.
My fingers reach out, feeling forth;
   seeking, searching.
My ears are open, listening;
   seeking, searching.
My nose sniffs for any sign here;
   seeking, searching.
My tongue tastes the sweet nectar now;
   seeking, searching.
Here it is, within me, calling;
   seeking, searching.
Here I am, to greet it, hold it;
   seeking, searching.
Here we are, together, tightly;
   holding, knowing.
Inspiration, I call to you;
   hold me, know me.

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Current Mood: calmcalm
Current Music: "Something So Feminine About a Mandolin", -JB

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From:romandruid
Date:November 6th, 2006 01:54 am (UTC)
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Kewl! I like the litany effect and how the litany changes once you reach your destination. I also like your use of the five senses. If you tighten up some of the language (particularly the nose line), you'll be in terrific shape!

Here's an idea... toy with it if you will: what if you could slightly change the litany right after "Here it is, within me, calling" to transition a bit more gradually to the "holding, knowing." It seems like you've already found what you seeking for the three "Here" lines, and I wondered why you were still seeking. Because you don't yet grasp it?

Reminiscent of the "Are we there yet" chant? Hmm... I think you've got a theme going, mebbe.

(I also had some unpleasant imagery occur at the thought of you reaching deeply within yourself with your sense of touch... thoughts of tentacles ran through my mind and made me shudder.)

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